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PostSubject: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 5:26 pm

this is my 7th attempt at doing this pic and i still think it need something else but what i dont know, if anyone has any suggestions or constructive advice please help .....



so far i have drew on the eyes and snake on her arm

i have editied in the tongue

i have smudged some flying beasties out from the background

i have edited in the background

still need to do lighting and shadows
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 5:41 pm

Don't know what to say exactly Angie, the only thing I can think of is:
WOW... stunning !! Love067

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 5:46 pm

thankies Eva...you are very kind and sweet.......you dont think i need to fiddle with it any more?? i get the feeling somethings missing.......
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 5:50 pm

Is this for some assignment ??

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 5:55 pm

yes ....but i am only looking for suggestions not that i will use them.......i have been at it all day and brian just keeps saying mmmmm.....lol......dont get me wrong i like it and i think when the lighting and shadows are done it might look better, maybe i have just been at it too long.....lol......i have had her in 5 different poses, 3 different outfits and 2 different hairstyles .......i'm still doing the lighting etc now.....i dont know maybe i just need a boost..... Stretcher
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:00 pm

Maybe if you're doing the lighting, you could make her hair stand out a bit more (just a tad) I think the pic itself, the model, the hair & the clothing is spot on dancing

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:17 pm




i think this looks a bit better what do you think ??
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:20 pm

Lovely idea hiho maybe the rays just a tad less bright (just a tad).
And see how it looks ??

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:39 pm

Yep I agree with Eva just a little less bright with the rays and it should be perfect...lovely pic there Angie and you've done awesome drawing stuff on...I wouldnt know where to begin with drawing stuff in GIMP lol
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:51 pm



final attempt........it s the one i have just posted in the comp so if they dont like it they dont like it ...lol...i like it...i think..... Big smile
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 6:55 pm

I think it's great too Angie !! Awesome !! hiho happy *NEW*

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 7:02 pm

thankyou Q.......it was a pain in the ......to do but i was determined to get it done...lol,,,had my stubborn boots on......and thankies to both of you for the lovely comments.... thump thump thump
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 8:17 pm

Angie hun the final attempt is gorgeous it's perfect and if they dont like it then there's something wrong with them because it's AWESOME!!!
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 8:23 pm

Love067 Love067 awww thankies hun..... Love067 Love067

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 8:41 pm

NP Love067
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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 11th 2011, 11:52 pm

Ang, I think this is awesome, however you did ask for critique right? I hope I don't offend...but she looks too happy. For the background to be so foreboding and terrifying she looks as happy as a lark.

She needs to have a more 'fierce' look to match the overall theme...just my op and nothing more...and wayyyy more than I could ever achieve!! :510:

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PostSubject: Re: feedback needed please   March 12th 2011, 6:11 am

thanks Cece yep she does look happy ......she is in her element so i think thats what they were looking for but i noticed when i posted it that she looks as though she is biting her tongue.....lol.....grrrr....i am never truly happy with my pics....and hun i wont get offended in the least because i know that on here you will all give me honest feedback and i appreciate everything you all say...... cheers
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