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PostSubject: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 5:51 am

Here are some sims I'm working on for the Cstyles Modeling Agency. Just wanting some critique and feeback and be honest. You won't hurt my feelings.



Lazarus







Cameron





Cameron and Nyson's baby brother Keno...(Keno will be a model once I'm able to find a suitable hair. This hair has too many issues transparency wise.





Ok...there you have it. I tried to work out a lighter color hair for Lazarus but no matter how hard I tried, and how many colors only black looked best on him. At least in my opinion.

Forgive me on Lazarus's pictures...I totally did not work with lighting. I will post better ones of him later today.

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 6:02 am

Oooohhh, smexy boys. I wanna see more of Keno!!!

Hmm...I will be honest, Cameron's eyes seem a bit too big. Unless thats what you went for. I just feel like they give her a cartoon look. Perhaps it is also the pose used. Otherwise LOVE <3
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 6:07 am

Lazarus hottie tottie dont change a thing perfection there Love067

Keno cant really tell from that pic, more needed ......... Love067

Cameron, i dont know if its the eyes as ness said or the nose being too thin at the bridge that give her the cartoon look, other than that stunning Love067
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 8:52 am

Wow! Shocked

Lazarus is sooo handsome , hot and real! Love it! drools

Don't change nothing on him please! :D

I don't like Cameron. Her jaw is too wide. The shape of her eyes are very strange , the eyes are very poorly defined and the color is very ugly. The nose is disgusting. The freckles remain really bad in this type of girls , it leaves them worse. Her skin is too dark and nasty. And the eyebrows and the lips don't help her.
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 6:27 pm

Ok, in complete honesty... it's impossible for me to CRITIQUE a Sim lol But... I do really like Lazarus. Cameron is unique, I will give her that. Her features seem a bit dark in the pictures, so maybe change the lighting to a tad brighter for your shots Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 9:42 pm

all i can say is fab fab fab. great work cece. love them all. Smile Smile XX
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 15th 2011, 11:58 pm

Thanks all! I will post some better pics of Laz and Keno and take the suggestions regarding Cam and work on them. I've seen sim females with big purdy eyes so that was my attempt..I guess I failed...Lol...and her nose bridge I tapered just like a real nose, but..I see it is a bit too tapered so I will rework that also. I will post end results on her also.

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 12:14 am

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Wow! Shocked

Lazarus is sooo handsome , hot and real! Love it! drools

Don't change nothing on him please! :D

I don't like Cameron. Her jaw is too wide. The shape of her eyes are very strange , the eyes are very poorly defined and the color is very ugly. The nose is disgusting. The freckles remain really bad in this type of girls , it leaves them worse. Her skin is too dark and nasty. And the eyebrows and the lips don't help her.

Ok Lushness... just letting you know...Cameron killed herself after reading your critique!!! laughing bleh

Wow! Your honesty is astounding...I LOVE it!! (although it was a little harsh in some points...I can handle it...once you have dealt with ms3b you gain a tougher skin) I also know that everyone else has been honest with me as well and I truly truly do appreciate and love it!!

Glad I asked for suggestions and critique because I thought Cameron was a cutie!! happy2 *NEW* Have to rework her a bit.

Her skin is supposed to be dark...she is a black sim and created off the detail of being a dark skin black person. Is it the skin you don't like so much since you mentioned the freckles? I love the freckles and have never used them on a sim before. Back in the bin with you Cameron...if they can revive her that is!! excited

I won't change a thing on Laz since it has been agreed with all that he looks fine the way he is.
And I will post better pics of Keno! Smile
Ok...time to get back to work!hand dance

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 12:46 am

Actually I don't think you should change Cameron at all. Give her to me. I'll show you why lol :D
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 1:06 am

Ok Shyne...I will send Cameron to you and you show me what you are talking about!! Thankfully they were able to revive her after her attempted suicide so I will pm her link to you!! Thanks Shyne...you are a doll!! Bop

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 1:23 am

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Ok Shyne...I will send Cameron to you and you show me what you are talking about!! Thankfully they were able to revive her after her attempted suicide so I will pm her link to you!! Thanks Shyne...you are a doll!! Bop

I will try not to change her looks too much... I'm just gonna Shyne-a-fie her to give you some extra ideas Smile I'll PM you with her photos, we can have a good laugh together if it falls through lol
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 1:42 am

Do you want her sims3 pack or sim file?

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 1:51 am

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Do you want her sims3 pack or sim file?

.Sim file please Cece Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 2:35 am

Just pm'd her to you! hiho

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 2:49 am

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Just pm'd her to you! hiho

Thank you, Cece Smile I love playing with other peoples' Sims. I'm interested to see how she'll look after I give her a different skin tone etc...
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 5:30 am

ahem, Mary any chance we get to see the before and after pics too, please :heart: cherry please
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 16th 2011, 5:50 am

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ahem, Mary any chance we get to see the before and after pics too, please :heart: cherry please

Of course Smile Although... I am having trouble downloading lol I will do her 'make-over' once I get her working in my game *sigh*
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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 17th 2011, 12:49 am

Let me just say... all women are beautiful, and every girl is a princess Smile I will never suggest that a Sim needs to be changed... because how far away is that from suggesting that people need to be changed? LOL This is my version. Very Shyne-ee right? lol I honestly like Cece's version. She's lovely and soft and natural. I changed her hair, clothes, skin-tone and make-up. Tried my best to bring out her beauty, in my way.






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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 17th 2011, 1:32 am

Wow Wow Wow!!! Mary she looks amazing!!! You did a fab job on her makeover! I LOVE it!! I'm going to have you send you more of my females!! hiho

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PostSubject: Re: Just needing some feedback on some models. Critique me please.    May 17th 2011, 1:38 am

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Wow Wow Wow!!! Mary she looks amazing!!! You did a fab job on her makeover! I LOVE it!! I'm going to have you send you more of my females!! hiho

Hehehehe thanks Cece Smile I find it really fun to play around and see what I come up with. Cameron is a natural beauty, as I said to you, so she just needed a bit of an edge. I think with some nice lighting you could make her original form look just as lovely Smile
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