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PostSubject: So...how did I do?   July 24th 2012, 11:08 pm

I was bored, so I just wanted to do something.
I've seen people do similar things.

So, does it look realistic. I know I need to fix something things, but I'm not sure...

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 24th 2012, 11:29 pm

I'd say, 'good start' but does need a little more work. (although wayyyyy more than I could ever do!) hiho

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 24th 2012, 11:43 pm

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I'd say, 'good start' but does need a little more work. (although wayyyyy more than I could ever do!) hiho
Thanks! Smile
Yeah, I'm trying to see what else I have to do to it. Don't really know. No
I'll just keep staring at it until something hits me.

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 25th 2012, 7:03 am

I love the dripping mascara, but the blood looks a little unrealistic on her hand because there's no source of blood coming from above it (if that makes sense)
I love the overall picture & the coloring Smile
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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 25th 2012, 2:32 pm

Big smile I like this! Lol I always liked gory stuff! This sim is so gorgeous! I HAVE to use her for something I'm planning with my sims. But for what, I don't know yet. Hmmm as for my critique I think there should be no blood dripping coming from the ring finger. It makes the bleeding look like it starts too far up, unless its supposed to be gushing kinda? It's supposed to be coming from her eye right? Maybe also make some blood seep through the gaps where the fingers meet the hand. And make the blood flow down sort of in the direction her hand is angled and not in a straight line so it looks more like its running down her hand and not dripping straight from the fingers. Unless its supposed to be that way of course Razz
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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 25th 2012, 2:52 pm

I think some good advice from all! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 25th 2012, 5:07 pm

The edit is great, the dripping mascara is very well done I think, the blood I'm not sure (like Vanity and Kosmo said).
Still a great edit, like CeCe said waayyyy better than I could ever do ! hiho dancing

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 25th 2012, 5:18 pm

Thanks everyone.
I see what you mean about the bloody side. It was supposed to be coming from her eye. The straight lines to look a bit awkward, huuh? LOL.

Rotating the hard? Not completely sure how to do that. I know that I would have to use Magic tool at some point, but after that, I don't know.

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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 28th 2012, 4:04 pm

You know I love this model. <3

As for the editing:

Blood is very thick and dark - so when drawing it, it's better to go for darker, rustier shades of red with brown in them. It also, uh, coagulates (I'm so gross) so it's dripping pattern would be kind of like....thick syrup? That's why they always used corn-syrup for fake blood in old black-and-white horror movies.

Right now it looks a little too much like she has watercolor paint on her hands. I would make it more opaque, in thicker more irregular streaks, with a bit of a highlight to them.

Also, the splatter on her chest looks kind of random - because there is no blood leading up to it. I would probably remove it altogether.

Mascara looks good. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: So...how did I do?   July 29th 2012, 10:03 pm

You did a great job. And great advice in her. I think only editing the blod is enough.Becausw if you do more about the picture i think you see to much on it. Keep it calm.

And love that simmie :D
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