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PostSubject: Crime Drama WIP Chapter 1   August 22nd 2012, 1:10 am

Chapter 1


"What the hell!" Judy exclaimed, "We have another whole day before the case closes."
She stretched, reaching the other counter as she fell against the cold floor.

"Well, we don't have a choice in the matter anyway!" Alaina complained, angrily. There was a slight awkward silence between them before Judy finally replied.

"Well, I at least make sure they leave us the hell alone! You know that I do a lot for this house!" Judy started to get up and leave the room, but something stopped her, Today's news. The front page talked about a little girl being raped by a man in his 80s and then stabbed her four times in the abdomen. It was front page news because she was only five years old. Judy turned to look at her sister,

"Laina, we gotta do something to help her family!" Implored Judy, as she tried to convince Alaina, But, she knew that it would take sometime to convince.
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"Well, don't just stand there, knock!" Alaina barked loudly, trying to hind, that would work.
"Okay, okay! Just let me then!" Judy demanded in a loud tone. Judy slowly knocked three times and the door opened almost immediately,
"Hello, is this Maxine and Robert Andrews?" questioned Alaina. The couple looked at each other and replied, with a smile on their faces.

"Why yes, yes we are! Did you hear about our daughter?" They looked upset and the only thing Alaina and Judy could do was hug the couple. They gently took the woman's arms and Alaina hugged her as Judy followed suit, hugging the man.
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PostSubject: Re: Crime Drama WIP Chapter 1   August 22nd 2012, 5:08 pm

Great story so far !! dancing hand dance

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PostSubject: Re: Crime Drama WIP Chapter 1   August 23rd 2012, 12:35 am

Thanks eva, I really appreciate that! dancingbanana dancingbanana dancingbanana
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