She is beautiful and I love her eye shape! You truly captured her 'bad girl' style!
Side note: You will have to post as much of the custom content as possible. That should not be hard since you packed her with Ea clothes, but things like her skin, eyes, hair, etc,...those basic things do need to be listed so those that download her can get her to look exactly like she is presented.
Also...you will need to add a CAS shot and a profile shot. Otherwise, your presentation is wonderfully done! Just add those things and if you have any problems, note it and somebody here might know where it can be located.