HIII!!

*THIS IS NOT THE FINAL VERSION!*

So I have finally finished my lipstick. Using Shyne's tutorial for the thousandth time, I think I did okay. I like they way it turned out, but I know to a professional's eye, or very observant eye, that there are mistakes. So I want you point them out. I want this to be really good. The lips have a theme...so I to try to stick with. It's a surprise (maybe?). It's called "Pleasure Lips". :D

So I did 3 different versions ( I just changed the tints in CAS), one is just all red, and the others have a little shine to them. One shine is subtle, and the other is more pronounced. I want to know which one is better and you know, if I should change somethings to them.

So um, here is it. I hope you like it. And you should know the model. ;)









In CAS:

Love your new lipstick Sleepy !! I like the shiny ones better !

Thanks...I still think I should edit it a bit before posting the final.

I haven't tested the lipstick yet myself, but it sure looks promising !! ;)

^_^ I hope it works well.

It looks GREAT Sleepy :D <3 I will download immediately.

Thanks.

I like it, but I do think it needs a tiny bit more work. I love the shape for one, you get an A+ on that. I think the lines need to be a bit more subtle, but I can see where you are headed with it and I like it!! Like Eva...I prefer the glossy one better. But it still needs a bit more gloss. All is just my op. And you have done far better than I ever could girlie!! I'm proud of you for stepping into another avenue of creator!!

I'm proud of her too, this looks way better than my first lipsticks ;)

I think this is great for a first lipstick. Though everyone prefers shiny lipsticks it would seem, once in a while its nice to have a decent more matte lipstick!

thanks everyone. I like the critique because I want this good. I will see what I can re-do in the edit.

I was trying to for this:

So I made some changes. This are from CAS. I will do the in-game when I finish with school.



I actually like both. Just may keep both and do v1 and v2.

Ah nice!!! <3

deeper red... maybe its just cas...

Thanks Mary.

I like those alot esp the darker version, i always into darker colors hehe =D
anyways my only comment for it is that you can make those lines in it a lil bit less ? like the model you're taking it off


buuuuut still i like where u'r going its always nice to know more ppl are making nice make up=)

My thoughts exactly to what Louma said! Great work so far!

I've already posted this for download already. LOL. But thanks. I'll pay more attention when I do my next lips.