So...the poses don't work on my MacBook so sorry for the lame screenshots... opinions please!!! If someone is better at taking screenshots, feel free to download my sim (play with her, and take some screenshots lol)




You can download here: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?dkkcbycbulbkrma

Way, way, better!
You're catching on and learning quick - she is really good and looks realistic.

The only thing I would change is less full lower lip. . . . . . but that may be just me. I don't think anyone has a lower lip that plump.

Excellent job Heleendejonge.

I think your simmeh looks cute Heleen! I think you did a great job, especially since it's your 3rd simmeh!

However if you want to post and upload your simmehs here, please have a look at these 'guidelines' (here).
You have to include a couple of CAS and profile shots as well. Also you have to include and give credit to the CC and CC creators you used (as much as possible).
You can still amend and add these in your post of course.

Like pdxwinn said I'd reduce the plumpness of her lower lip a bit so it doesn't look like it's cutting into her chin. I would also play around with the shape of her eyes a bit to add a little more...well, not really "definition" but...shape? *has no idea what she's trying to say*

If that makes any sense. Right now her eyes look more doll like and not really realistic (although this is just a preference of mine so feel free to disregard this). As well, I'd change the lip shape a bit and add more definition and try for a more natural shape (again, this is just a preference).

Some other tips that may help you:

1. Like Eva said, more face and profile shots (as the face is why people download sims so it's best to show off as much of it as you can)

2. Take pictures of your sims with the walls up if you're taking it indoors. I usually take mine in a small enclosed space with a crap-ton of lights on the ceiling.

3. If you want a more realistic face for a sim, I recommend taking inspiration from pictures of people you find on the internet/games/celebrities/friends/characters/whatever if you want a specific shape for a feature. (mouth, eyes, jaw, nose, etc).

I hope this helps you!

P.S I am experiencing eyebrow envy. >:

Nice job, her outfit is cute ;)

All advice is very well given!! I like that her face is so delicate however with that being said, the hair may be overpowering her. Something that can easily be fixed of course once she is downloaded! I think you are improving and I love how you are sincere in your request for feedback and critique. The best learners are the listeners I say. (hey...I just made that up and it sounds FAB!!) Lol!

Also, do follow the guidelines as they are helpful to others that want to download your Sim and I always appreciate a nice return link to the creators...as many as you can at least remember...thanking them for their wonderful creations i.e. poses as well.

I have a feeling we are going to have a top Sim creator here in the very near future!!

hello hello hello since she is only the 3rd simlady you created i think you deserve a cause i remember my sims from the early days they looked so bad

Just try to follow the advice people give you and you will create every time better sims and do not be scared to use the sliders when you made your sim and you like her than save her in cas and than on that one try out all the sliders a bit more try different expressions you would be surprised what nice sims you can get

Hope to see more sims from you

vero

She's SO very cute! You did a great job!