Since the forums are so screwy and we've moved over here anyway, I'll repost the scores from Assignment #4:
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ASSIGNMENT #4 - PHOBIAS
-Thanatophobia-
Fear of dying.
Jamie May – Toblie
Akasha:
10/10 - Phobia Representation
10/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Overall
I love this picture! I was interested to see how this phobia would
be represented and I was surprised to see it done this way; very
clever! The only criticism I can think of is that the characters seem a
little scrunched together. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Overall 10/10
Total: 59/60
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-Pediophobia-
Fear of children.
Arabesque Van Albrecht – CeleSeraphym
Akasha:
8/10 - Phobia Representation
9/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Overall
Damn girl! You always outdo yourself with the
set and extras. However, it looks, to me, like she’s more afraid of
getting up and speaking in front of people than she is of children.
Overall, awesome job!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 9.5/10
Creativity 9.5/10
Overall 10/10
Total: 56/60
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-Mysophobia-
Fear of being contaminated with dirt or germs.
Umbra Willow – RepulsiveDesire1
Akasha:
9/10 - Phobia Representation
8/10 - Creativity
9.5/10 – Overall
I really like this picture! And I’m totally getting that mattress
the next time I get the chance! I love the look on your model’s face,
like ‘Ew!’ lol The only thing, and I hate to say it, is that the
picture is a little too bright. I know you feel that your pictures
don’t look as good when they’re darker, but for this one in particular,
you really needed to resist the urge to turn the brightness up. In
fact, it would have made her surroundings look dirtier if you had turned
the brightness down.
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 10/10
Creativity 8/10
Overall 8.5/10
Total: 53/60
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-Nyctophobia-
Fear of the dark.
Lilith Noir – SweetBaby
Akasha:
8/10 - Phobia Representation
9/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Overall
It took me a while to realise the dude in the window, and it scared
the crap out of me when I did! Lol I really love this picture! The
only thing is that it's a bit too light for this particular fear. Great
job!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 8.5/10
Creativity 8.5/10
Overall 9/10
Total: 53/60
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-Claustrophobia-
Fear of enclosed spaces.
Kira Gray – LyrianFleur
Akasha:
8/10 - Phobia Representation
10/10 - Creativity
8/10 - Overall
The concept of this picture is interesting and unique. I love the
idea of the mirror maze! I always hated those when I was a kid...it
always made me feel like there was no way out. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 10/10
Creativity 7.5/10
Overall 8/10
Total: 51.5/60
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-Aquaphobia-
Fear of water.
Ebony Flame – Bubby189
Akasha:
10/10 - Phobia Representation
7/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Overall
I love the green lights, it gives this picture a very eerie feel.
This picture kind of hit home for me, because I work at a hotel at
night, and I have to take care of the pool. I have a fear of contained
water (pools, water towers, stuff like that) and it’s especially creepy
at night. Well done!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 8/10
Creativity 7.5/10
Overall 8/10
Total: 49.5/60
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-Acrophobia-
Fear of heights.
Lemiko Samura – ChicagoStorm
7/10 - Phobia Representation
7/10 - Creativity
7.5/10 - Overall
I was kind of disappointed with this picture, to be honest. I
mean, your model looks great and the scenery is beautiful, but it
doesn’t really show exactly what she’s afraid of. It looks more like
she’s afraid of the ocean than of heights. Maybe if it had been shot
from below her to see how high up she is, I dunno. I do, however, love
her outfit and hair. Good job.
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 10/10
Creativity 7.5/10
Overall 8.5/10
Total: 47.5/60
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-Agoraphobia-
Fear of crowded places.
Lucille Donovan – KelleD014
Akasha:
7/10 - Phobia Representation
7/10 - Creativity
8/10 - Overall
I like this picture, but it seems more like she’s afraid of
conforming and not really to crowds… Also, I would really love to see
your model in a different outfit. But all in all, it’s a really cool
picture. Great job!
Phoebe:
Phobia representation 9/10
Creativity 7.5/10
Overall 7.5/10
Total: 46/60
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-Monophobia-
Fear of being alone.
Despair Ruine – estrellalin
7/10 - Phobia Representation
8/10 - Creativity
7/10 - Overall
The concept for this picture is interesting. I think the whole
post-apocalypse thing is really clever, but without reading the
description, you don’t really get that feel. Also, even though the
editing you did was within the rules, it was a little much. Less is
more! Good job!
Phobia representation 8.5/10
Creativity 7/10
Overall 7.5/10
Total:45/60
Dropped Out Raven Nightshade – Zeri
Eliminated No one, since someone dropped out.
Good luck on the next assignment!!