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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 1st 2011, 1:49 pm | |
| Pixie30 with Cinderella: 20/20Creativity: 10/10 Interest: 10/10 Comments: Your text placement is divine in this picture, and even though the glowing fairy dust is just brushes for whatever editing program you use, your placement of them is stunning. All of the color tones blend wonderfully together making your sim look like she's really there and not just cut and pasted. This is a perfect story book cover. Well done. dragonfriend1 with The Ugly Duckling: 16/20Creativity: 9/10 Interest: 7/10 Comments: I think your picture is overall rather creative. But I feel if you would have put an invisible lamp in front of your sim it would have given your picture that last little nudge of drama I was looking for. ilovetaylorlatner with The Princess & The Pea: 15/20Creativity: 8/10 Interest: 7/10 Comments: I really love that you actually edited the pea in your sims hand, the way you set up your picture really makes it look like a book cover. I do feel like you lost a lot of pic quality with the way it was edited though. horsesrox76 with The Little Mermaid: 13/20Creativity: 6/10 Interest: 7/10 Comments: You did an excellent job with your editing in this photograph, the fin looks so real, but the picture needed a little more detail in my opinion. Lottie1010 with Sleeping Beauty: 12/20Creativity: 6/10 Interest: 6/10 Comments: Your couple looks adorable, but check out the tip I gave DeadlySimP about the outdoor lighting. ZombiePink with Goldilocks & The Three Bears: 12/20Creativity: 6/10 Interest: 6/10 Comments: I love that you have her bending over smelling flowers, but you should read the tip I gave DeadlySimP about the outdoor lighting. :D DeadlySimP with Little Red Riding Hood: 12/20Creativity: 6/10 Interest: 6/10 Comments: I do love the wolf in the background, she looks just lovely, but the natural outside light in the game is just horrible, something I do when I want to take pictures of sims outside is wait until night time. Then I place invisible lamps in front of them until they're perfectly light up and take my pictures, the quality looks better and you can photoshop the clouds and sun in later. :D Shizuko87 with Hansel & Gretel: 11/20Creativity: 5/10 Interest: 6/10 Comments: I think your idea for them holding hands was just adorable, but beware of some poses, they can leave your sims looking stiff and unreal. jake06 with Alice in Wonderland: 10/20Creativity: 5/10 Interest: 5/10 Comments: I am very happy that you used multiple characters for your story book cover, but it could have been so much better! Alice sleeping under a tree with lush rolling hills and something like the bunny rabbit peeking from behind the tree at alice as she sleeps, and maybe the mad hatter having a tea party in the distance would have been better. To be submitted with Entry: - Story Name: - Chapter Number: - Assignment Number: - Chapter Name (Name your Chapter): - Theme Name: - Evie - FOUNDER/CREATOR - Kaile - PERMANENT - SimsARL - PERMANENT Once we have at least 10 contestants I will extend the sign ups a few days for any additional competitors.jake06 - Alice in wonderland ZombiePink - Goldilocks & The Three Bears Shizuko87 - Hansel & Gretel dragonfriend1 - The Ugly Duckling horsesrox76 - The Little Mermaid Lottie1010 - Sleeping Beauty ilovetaylorlatner - The Princess & the Pea DeadlySimP - Little Red Riding Hood pixie30 - Cinderella yooriah - Beauty & the Beast JackGriff - Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs Evergreen226 - Peter Pan vickyvalley - Rapunzel = Submitted = Extension Requested = Seen it = Dropped = No Show [Click the books to view full scale.]
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DeadlySimP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 1st 2011, 3:59 pm | |
| Hmmm...Ok...Actually that was the point... I didn't want them to be completely bright I wanted the foresty feel and in the story nothing happens at night so yeah... Seen the assignment...but I don't quite understand what we have to do though...:| |
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Pixie30 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 1st 2011, 5:02 pm | |
| first? Yeh a little shocked anyway lemme check i got this assignment right we have to recreate the beging of our story with a goth theme? can you please explain it further thankyou |
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cecesaun1 Admin
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 1st 2011, 9:26 pm | |
| Pixie why are you surprised you had an awesome entry!! Actually....they all were pretty fantastic!! Ok...back to lurking... |
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Pixie30 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 1st 2011, 10:05 pm | |
| I'm not sure, I just thought a few were alot better than mine, plus I spelt something wrong XD thankyouu thoo<3 |
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horsesrox76 Member
Posts : 21 Thanks : 9 Join date : 2011-05-19 Comments : I love to chat!
| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 2nd 2011, 3:08 am | |
| Seen it, I think I have an idea but idk if ill have time but i hope I do (im going on vaca) |
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LunaBell Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 2nd 2011, 8:53 am | |
| It's me, Shizuko87. Seen it! |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 3rd 2011, 2:23 pm | |
| Just do your first chapter as normal, but give it a gothic twist. For example: (the lion king) If for my first chapter I had planned to do 3 images, the first being a pic of a happy family in a park, second father and son having an important conversation, and third father dying and son crying by his side. I would need to make all of those images have a gothic twist. |
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Lottie1010 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 4th 2011, 1:34 pm | |
| oh no i have done it so that i have 1 picture that looks gothic and the other pics are leading up to the gothic pic! im going to have to start again arent i or will that be ok? |
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Evie Supreme Member
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horsesrox76 Member
Posts : 21 Thanks : 9 Join date : 2011-05-19 Comments : I love to chat!
| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 5th 2011, 10:03 am | |
| I did the same thing too Will we be judged less for it because if we are then ill redo it but im not sure as im very busy :S |
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dragonfriend1 Member
Posts : 4 Thanks : 1 Join date : 2011-05-24
| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 5th 2011, 12:10 pm | |
| I'm having some issues with my game I'll let you know if they're resolved |
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DeadlySimP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 5th 2011, 3:32 pm | |
| So we should start out story from the start with a gothic twist... That means we will tell chapter 1 of our story like the story book or we can write our own story ? |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 5th 2011, 10:40 pm | |
| Everyone should try to stick to the original story. Going a little off the story here and there to make it unique is encouraged. Each chapter (Assignment) I will give you a theme, please apply that theme to your pictures for your story. This competition is mostly about the photography, so keep your pictures interesting. |
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DeadlySimP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 6th 2011, 4:10 am | |
| Ok thanks I will probably have my entry today :D |
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Pixie30 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 6th 2011, 12:23 pm | |
| Hmm i has an idea, do i have to show stuff from the book, because we read about cinderllas mum dying and then daddy marries when she is just a child, but then it skips her childhood? But i wanna show her childhood, would i be allowed? like showing her being teased by the step sisters? |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 6th 2011, 1:37 pm | |
| - Pixie30 wrote:
- Hmm i has an idea, do i have to show stuff from the book, because we read about cinderllas mum dying and then daddy marries when she is just a child, but then it skips her childhood? But i wanna show her childhood, would i be allowed? like showing her being teased by the step sisters?
Of course pixie! |
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Pixie30 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 7th 2011, 3:01 am | |
| Okay thas awesome :D i can start them tonight |
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horsesrox76 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 7th 2011, 9:03 am | |
| im so stuck Ariel didnt really have anything goth :S This is hard >.< |
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Lottie1010 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 7th 2011, 12:43 pm | |
| Yeah i know what you mean horsey i havent followed the story so that i could try and make my assignment gothic and i havent applied the theme to all pics evie is there anyway you could bend the rules? like we can only apply the theme to a couple of the pictures? im finding it really hard and i don't think im the only one |
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LunaBell Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 12:57 am | |
| I need to remake Hansel & Gretel, I thought I saved them but something went wrong or I thought wrong. I am also having trouble coming up with an idea.. |
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miss_lochness VIP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 1:18 am | |
| *Lurking* You guys all amaze me with these fab entries!! |
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dragonfriend1 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 7:55 am | |
| Unfortunately, my game has been malfunctioning because I bought Generations, and won't save screenshots. I will be unable to hand it in for a little while, so I'll have to drop. Sorry. Good luck to everyone else. And I'll lurk though! |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 12:52 pm | |
| The story doesn't need to be gothic. It's as simple as giving your sims dark clothing, goth make up and placing goth furniture around but still doing your story as planned. But if it's too hard I guess I can remove the themes permanently. |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 12:55 pm | |
| Today is the deadline and no entries. |
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Lottie1010 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 1:10 pm | |
| I think you should keep the themes but make it so that only a couple of pictures need to contain the theme not every picture but thats my opinion. Anyway im just putting the finishes on my last picture and then i will enter it |
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DeadlySimP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 1:11 pm | |
| I have some problem with my game and it can't load....-.-''' |
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Lottie1010 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 1:18 pm | |
| - Story Name: Sleeping Beauty - Chapter Number: 1 - Assignment Number: 2 - Chapter Name (Name your Chapter): Revelation - Theme Name: Gothic Image 1: Image 2: Image 3: Image 4: |
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DeadlySimP Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 8th 2011, 6:57 pm | |
| Shoulkd we write a story along with our pictures ? |
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LunaBell Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 9th 2011, 1:49 am | |
| I will need to finish tomorrow, I was working on it now but my husband is sleeping and the light from the monitor is bothering him. So I have to turn it off, sorry. |
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Evie Supreme Member
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LunaBell Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 9th 2011, 10:32 pm | |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 9th 2011, 11:26 pm | |
| woohoo! Two contestants left! lol. Alright, so since everyone vanished I'm going to let you two decide if you want to finish your stories next assignment and then I'll announce the winner, or you can continue on the full 10 weeks doing a chapter a week. |
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dragonfriend1 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 10th 2011, 8:02 am | |
| These are great! I'm really sorry I had to drop |
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horsesrox76 Member
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 12th 2011, 4:11 pm | |
| Well, I'm the only judge I'll work on scores ASAP. |
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cecesaun1 Admin
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 13th 2011, 12:55 am | |
| Where'd everybody go?!! I wanted to see this comp go full run... |
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Pixie30 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 15th 2011, 5:13 pm | |
| wait for me!!! i am going to do it tomrow, i lost the link to the webby :/ |
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Evie Supreme Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 18th 2011, 2:58 am | |
| Alright guys, I'm sorry, but I'm going to close this, there just wasn't enough interest. All of you that did turn in (even the late ones) did great, you really did, but I guess it just wasn't time for "once upon a time" to shine. I don't think I'll be tackling this idea again, I've already tried twice. It was also too confusing and, meh. I'm sorry guys. I do encourage everyone to sign up for inspiration when cycle two comes around. Thank you to everyone who participated. |
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Lottie1010 Member
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| Subject: Re: Assignment 1 Scores and Assignment 2 June 18th 2011, 5:48 am | |
| can we see our scores please i want to know what i got |
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