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Good job everyone! And, again, I'm sorry for the delay.










Lemiko Samura – ChicagoStorm


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Gorgeous picture! Very creative how you put the chimney to make it look all smoky/steamy. Awesome job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Amazing. I looks so great and the poem is short but still great. Nothing bad to say. Well done

Total: 80/80

Arabesque Van Albrecht – CeleSeraphym


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 8/10
Overall 9/10
This is a gorgeous picture, I love the blues, and it’s never too dark! lol But I’m not the biggest fan of all the stuff around her. It looks edited in, but I’m giving you the benefit of the doubt and trusting that it’s not. Beautiful poem as always. Good job.

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 9.5/10
Amazing again Cel. The poem was fantastic! Her expression and pose are great. The feather/wings looks great but the only thing I don't like it the lighting is sorta weird. But other than that, great job (:

Total: 76.5/80

Jamie May – Toblie


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 9.5/10
Beautiful picture and poem. She looks traumatized somehow from the blank staring look in her eyes. Great job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 9/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 8.5/10
Overall 8.5/10
Pretty good, not fantastic but it's still good. The poetry is good and so is your picture but it doesn't really...pop. And her eyes are sorta weird. More like zombie eyes then a depressed persons. Good job

Total: 74.5/80

Lucille Donovan – KelleD014


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 8/10
Overall 9/10
Bravo for writing your own poem! It’s really good. I like the picture, you can feel the emotion in it. The only thing that’s bugging me is that the colours are a little odd, especially for a gothic shot. I mean, you don’t need all black, but some patterns would have brought it up a notch. Good job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 9.5/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 9/10
Overall 9/10
It's a basic idea but it always works. The poem was good and I really like her expression. The lighting is good but it's a bit simple. Still great though

Total: 73.5/80



Eliminated

Kelle. Your pictures have grown so much over this competition! I'm so proud of you! I'm really sad to see you go, but I really hope to see you next cycle!



Good luck on the next assignment!

Nice Toblie (;

I love it Toblie - it's beautiful!

And I love snow (I miss winter already!)

Oh wow Toblie...your model is so beautiful. Great photo.

I can finally see all the pictures, now! Gorgeous gorgeous!
Toblie's looks beautiful and I can't what to see Chicago's and Cel's!

awesome_phoebe wrote:

Well it was more the creepy e_e Like the porno parts xD And near the end where she takes off her teeth and makeup. I was like OMG

Nothing was better than the ending.

"But Mommy, you wouldn't let me die"
"I'm not your mommy BITCH"
*jesus kick*

I don't remember any teeth... is this before she tries to you know what with you know who?? (XD Love my coverups so there are no spoilers" besides the end. which was funny.

Love the picture Toblie!

Lol that's my favourite part and you see like her neck snap xD Oh and

*in Russian accent* "Or I'll cut off your little prick before you even know what it's for"
*kid pisses pants*
*in Russian accent* "You piss your pants"

xD And when she takes out her teeth and stuff it's after tries to do that with you know who cause she gets angry and tries to kill you know who o_o Lol, I'm terrible at coverups x]

O_O

Toblie that picture is so sad-ish but I loves it lol

Mines will be coming up tonight. Ack! I only have two ideas and mostly like I wont find a good motorcycle anywhere hmm. I wish FreshPrince would try his hand at one..like right now lol.

Cel ur so right, it always look better in my head than in game -sigh- but alteast I can manipulate to the best of my ability.

Now this Orphan movie, I'd have to slap that lil heffa!

Thats me ^ Obvious right? ..I was at school and for some reason I couldn't log in..stupid campus computers lol

LOL Chi - I'm working on mine right now. I completely scrapped my original idea (again) and went a little simpler because of the time. Sooooo...we'll see I guess! And DOH! I need to finish the poem! Doh! Forgot all about it!

Yeah I did the same since there isn't a decent motorcycle around. I wrote my poem in class today :lol:

Sweet! I can't wait to see your submission :bounce:

Hurry up girls!!!!!!!

Believe in me, have faith
I wont lead you wrong
Step in my arms, my world
I wont let you fall,
Forget about the others
my eyes are on you
trust my feelings are true
Step in my arms, my world
let all others see your earthly beauty
and when they see us smile
they will forget you weren't cut
from the same thread as I
don't worry about being neglected
because I will always love you
Step in my arms, my world
I wont let you fall


*Edit* took that scheming center out

Oh nice. Dang!
love the poem too.

Thanks Toblie...but I'm not too happy with it. It was a rush job. Next time I wont get comfy with the heater on lol

Chi, you're as bad as everyone says I am -- why would you hate that pic? It's purple for pete's sake - best color ever!

I love it, and the poem too.

Larger pic here

Yay! They're all in!

Phoebe, I need your scores, hun. :D

that's all i can say Cel.
it truely is an amazing shot.

Wow cele! Now that shot is beautiful, amazing, and way 2 creative! The way you captured the light and each of your models emotions was well done. Now I would be honored to be kicked out by that pic lol.
We almost think alike, I was going to attempt something like this last assignment. Scary.

hurry with the scores :lol:

My internet is being a bitch right now....sorry

Thank you Toblie & Chi There's something about the color & pattern of the rocks (and that pampas grass plant) that makes it look sunny or something on that side of the picture. It's weird that it came out that way. Hrrmmm...

I was going to do this shot indoors and I had built a set, but it wasn't working out well. I ended up having to throw their butts outside, lol :lol:

Done the scores (:

Sorry it's taking so long, guys. I'm in the process of moving, and it's 4:30am and I've just now been able to get on here.... There's a group here that's seriously the worst group of kids I ever had the misfortune of dealing with.... I'll get the scores up as soon as possible.

It's okay Kash -- moving can be stressful as hell! And those kids sound obnoxious -- we could make some pictures showing how we would..."deal" with them... :twisted:

Giggity....