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You all did awesome! I'm proud of everyone!! :D






Jamie May - Toblie


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Dude! When you look at this picture, you can just feel the anger resonating from it! Your model is seething, and it’s very believable that she made that mess! lol Awesome job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Your work is wonderful as always. I can see nothing I don't like about the picture, except the view from the window. It just doesn't go with the rest of the picture but thats not a very big deal. I love it, she looks great, her expression, the layout, the atmosphere. Good job.

Total: 80/80

Arabesque Van Albrecht - CeleSeraphym


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
This is such a kickass picture! Just everything about it reeks of awesomeness! My favourite parts are the skeletons in the water, pulling the guy down, and I freakin love the cigarette in your model’s mouth…it makes her look so badass and a little nonchalant about the fact that she’s taking the guy down…like ‘Come here bitch!’ lol Two thumbs up!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
There is nothing I can find that's wrong with this picture. It's amazing, I love it! I knew you could do it Cel. Good work!

Total: 80/80

Ebony Flame - Bubby189


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 9/10
Overall 9/10
I absolutely love your model’s dress! Or at least all the blood on it! lol I also really love the demon behind her…very creepy. But I have to agree with Phoebe, the ground is a little bright, and it would have been nice if Grimmy were in the shot a little more. Awesome job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 8.5/10
Overall 8.5/10 I like it but I think the ground is sort of throwing it off for me, it's just to bright. I'd also like it if the grim reaper was fully in the shot and not cut off. The poem is awesome and your models look and expression are great. And one more thing..the ghosts are in their underwear o_o It would look better if they were in like Gothic clothing. Other wises well done.

Total: 75/80

Lemiko Samura - ChicagoStorm


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 8/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 8/10
I really love this picture, it has a creepy circus quality to it, but I don’t really get the connection to the poem…. Both are great on their own…they just don’t connect for me…. Good job.

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 9/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 9.5/10 - I have to be honest, but I don't really get it *I'm so stupid x_x* Sorry, I just take awhile to understand things sometimes but I still don't see it so that's why you only got a 9 for how well the grief was represented. But the picture looks awesome! And so does your sim. I love the expression on her face but she has like a hunched back which looks a bit weird. The poem is GREAT. I love the background. Well done.

73.5/80

Lucille Donovan - KelleD014


Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 8/10
Picture 8/10
Overall 9/10
I like this picture, you can feel her anger, and not just because of the knife. lol I disagree with Phoebe, the room looks like a hotel room, which is really cool, and adds to the story, but the room is just a little too bare. Also, because the one side of the room is so dark, and your model is dark, and your model’s victims are so light, it kind of brings the focus away from your model. Great job!

Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 8.5/10
Overall 8.5/10
I like the idea and it's expressed well. The expression and pose of the sims are great. The only thing is that, the colours of the room are to bright. I'm not sure if it's her room and if it's not then the colours probably wouldn't be that dark but it just throws the picture off a bit. And the colours of the room don't really go..I'm a bit of a perfectionist and I hate it when things don't go well together. But apart from my need for perfectness you did a very good job. Also the poem is great!

Total: 71/80


Dropped Out

Lilith Noir - SweetBaby


Eliminated

No one since SB dropped.


Good luck on the next assignment!

Cel it was a gift and it's in the Store. I was trying to recreate Dita Von Teese. and thank you

*blink*

*cough*

Emmm,clears throat...I forgot to log in last time I was here. Opppsie!

lol

Um Akasha, May 3rd is a Monday..not Tuesday....so what day is the deadline??

Oh, sorry! lol Midnight Tuesday....so, basically Mon night.

oh good! i get more time ^.^ even though i just found a poem :D

Thanks for the clarification lol
I'm about 2 start mines now and try to get it in tonight

Awesome. :D

i havent even started my picture =O i have no idea what to do for it...but i do have my poem

:bounce: so any updates any pics huh huh huh???

lol

im gonna work on my picture today, im stuck on what to do x(

Whoa...my game is running slow as molasses and it keeps freezing in create-a-style...I can't take one picture with it running like this -- it took 10 minutes to load 2 textures and the camera will barely turn

I have a few earlier shots that I took, but they're test shots that weren't meant to be submitted. I'll have to use one of those backup pics...no idea what's wrong with my game and absolutely NO time to figure it out at this point...dammit. So pissed right now...

I was in CAS today and it up and quite! SAme later when I was renovating a house. I haven't got ANY new patches. Won't patch right now. Can relate.

that sucks Cel! hopefully it starts behaving! :evil:

Oh, not fair cel. i wanna bash the creators of this game for ya, making such an inconsistent game, aaaaargh! check ya cc anything you downloaded, run a registry mechanic and spy ware and ...... that's all i have to say...... i hope you guys get ur pics done!
BLAST YOU EA and your inability to provide a stable game.

Sorry 2 hear that Cel, i do hope it comes around for you. I bet your test shots are awesome too ;)

And Im workin on mines now cuz I couldnt last night because I had to work on a last minute paper. I think I'll be elimnated this round lol, its a rush job and my idea will take too long to set up right now.

You can do it Chicago! WOOT WOOT!

You'll be okay Chicago -- your pictures always make me drop my frikkin' jaw, and this one will be no different I'm having to use one of my very earliest shots, sort of a test shot, because my game isn't running right. So I might be the one eliminated this time. And I haven't started on the poem...THAT'S bad -- if it sounds like a 4 year old on crayola dust wrote it, well...yeah.

I doubt you will be eliminated cuz ur so ill...Im tryin hard to get my model out of cas and onto set, but I'm doing alot at once..homework, moving my room downstairs so the baby can have my old room, and trying to keep a 45lb dog off me lol, she's a big baby.

Chicago and kel and Cel i eagerly await ur entries. :bounce:

Here it is Toblie lol



*You can bet I hate this picture, the poem was pretty decent for something right off the head lol. Then I got a message saying "Flagrant System Error...wtf is that? I couldnt do anything afterwards but quit the game. Hopefully I didnt kill it.*

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice Chicago really good, i think that is one of my faves in the bunch. Can I add it to my blog.

Chicago, that's cool as crap -- you made it sound like it would be BAD! Are you nuts...? And is that a real cage?! LOL I like it...it would make an excellent cover for a story.

I've had Flagrant System Error -- it was AwesomeMod related. If you have AM in your game, you might want to go over to MATY and read what they have to say about it. I had to reinstall my game to get rid of it, but according to Pes mine was REALLY messed up. Yours might not be.

*edit - and cripes, how did I miss the Death Note reference??? You might not like it, but I love that pic Chicago -- well done!

WOW Cel and you said it wouldn't be good. Sheesh
Blew me away, i love it. I love the colour of your photos and the lighting you choose, very tastefully done.

Good luck judges on this and now we wait for Kel! ^_^

Wow you guys. I came back here expecting no less than complete awesomeness, and you all sure delivered!

Can't wait to see yours Kelle :D

hey kash, i got the due date mixed up in my head somehow! i thought it was due tomorrow night....i was trying to rush and finish it real quickly but i keep dozing off and jerking awake xD so i need to go to bed, but i will try to get it posted ASAP tomorrow morning! hopefully thats ok

LOL my last message disappeared...anyway, Kelle -- Chicago and I submitted ours last night (look above), LOL! :lol: I want to see yours now! :bounce:

Thank you Toblie! (and SweetBaby! We miss you around here!) I'm not so sure about this one because it was an early shot -- I had planned on taking many more pictures before my game crapped out, and I ended up having to use one of the few that I had taken several days ago.

yeah thats what i was suppose to post last night before i went to bed but for some reason it didnt post....so i posted it this morning and forgot to take that last sentence out, fixed it though! and both pictures are AMAZING

im almost done with mine, just have to get everyone in position then do just a tiny bit of editing if it needs it then i will be done! i wasnt able to work on it this morning because we had some finishing touches to do on the house before the DCFS lady came over, which went fine btw!

You're fine Kelle.

Ok! im done! sorry for the wait guys!



Forgive Me

Faster, faster
I breathe faster
The tears falling.

I'm dying
Help me, help me
My life is falling apart
Watching me from inside are my sins
Not forgiven

Where did the time go in my life?
Where did it go, Oh
where did it go.
The People I have hurt and
The lives I have scarred
The lives i have ruined.

Let me be forgiven
Oh Please!
Let me be forgiven.
I wish oh I do wish
I could do it over again.

By: Emma Daniels

Awesome photo kelle! Its beautiful.

thanks lol i think everyone else did a much better job...

Definitely one of your best pictures Kelle! You had me worried -- and it came out beautifully! The coloring is AWESOME. Great job! This is absolutely ANYBODY'S game now...I can't decide which I like best :bounce:

And congrats on the positive DCFS visit too!

lol thanks cel, i love yours, the booby shot makes it spectacular xD not that thats the way i roll or anything... >.>

Great job Kelle!

I agree with Cel - I don't know which one I like best. You guys are all crazy talented!

Yay! Everyone got theres in!....oh, wait....that means I actually have to eliminate someone now.....dammit!


Phoebe- send me your scores please. :D

WOW Kel seriously sweet, how did you change just the people in the mirror to be sepia? i gotta learn some more editing skills.
You guys are just awesome.

Now we wait for scores (add akasha's avi pic here) lol

wow! Cool pics. Now we wait.

toblie i just had one layer that i made sepia and then one layer that is normal then i copy and pasted the sepia layer onto the normal layer then i erased the sepia layer ecept for the mirror part xD so i didnt do alot of editing... >.>

so that's how ya do it "the old erase the sepia layer trick?" cool i have to remember stuff like that.

Wow Cel and Kelle your pics are amazing! I'll just pack my bags now lol. I wish I could have done more in game but it was way too late and that damned error message screwed me over!!!! *shakes fists*

Kelle wrote:

lol thanks cel, i love yours, the booby shot makes it spectacular xD not that thats the way i roll or anything... >.>

:lol: People are always so quick to say that, especially on the TS3 Forum LOL

Chicago, you're not going ANYWHERE. It'll probably be me and Ari's booby... :face:

Nah, I'm heading out of town on this one.

Could be anyone, bites fingernails, everyones pics were so good.
i can't wait for the next assignment, even if I am eliminated i still wanna see the final shots!