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Jamie May - Toblie
Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Dude! When you look at this picture, you can just feel the anger resonating from it! Your model is seething, and it’s very believable that she made that mess! lol Awesome job!
Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
Your work is wonderful as always. I can see nothing I don't like about the picture, except the view from the window. It just doesn't go with the rest of the picture but thats not a very big deal. I love it, she looks great, her expression, the layout, the atmosphere. Good job.
Total: 80/80
Arabesque Van Albrecht - CeleSeraphym
Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
This is such a kickass picture! Just everything about it reeks of awesomeness! My favourite parts are the skeletons in the water, pulling the guy down, and I freakin love the cigarette in your model’s mouth…it makes her look so badass and a little nonchalant about the fact that she’s taking the guy down…like ‘Come here bitch!’ lol Two thumbs up!
Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 10/10
There is nothing I can find that's wrong with this picture. It's amazing, I love it! I knew you could do it Cel. Good work!
Total: 80/80
Ebony Flame - Bubby189
Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 9/10
Overall 9/10
I absolutely love your model’s dress! Or at least all the blood on it! lol I also really love the demon behind her…very creepy. But I have to agree with Phoebe, the ground is a little bright, and it would have been nice if Grimmy were in the shot a little more. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 8.5/10
Overall 8.5/10 I like it but I think the ground is sort of throwing it off for me, it's just to bright. I'd also like it if the grim reaper was fully in the shot and not cut off. The poem is awesome and your models look and expression are great. And one more thing..the ghosts are in their underwear o_o It would look better if they were in like Gothic clothing. Other wises well done.
Total: 75/80
Lemiko Samura - ChicagoStorm
Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 8/10
Creativity 10/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 8/10
I really love this picture, it has a creepy circus quality to it, but I don’t really get the connection to the poem…. Both are great on their own…they just don’t connect for me…. Good job.
Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 9/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 10/10
Overall 9.5/10 - I have to be honest, but I don't really get it *I'm so stupid x_x* Sorry, I just take awhile to understand things sometimes but I still don't see it so that's why you only got a 9 for how well the grief was represented. But the picture looks awesome! And so does your sim. I love the expression on her face but she has like a hunched back which looks a bit weird. The poem is GREAT. I love the background. Well done.
73.5/80
Lucille Donovan - KelleD014
Akasha:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 8/10
Picture 8/10
Overall 9/10
I like this picture, you can feel her anger, and not just because of the knife. lol I disagree with Phoebe, the room looks like a hotel room, which is really cool, and adds to the story, but the room is just a little too bare. Also, because the one side of the room is so dark, and your model is dark, and your model’s victims are so light, it kind of brings the focus away from your model. Great job!
Phoebe:
How well this stage of grief was represented 10/10
Creativity 9/10
Picture 8.5/10
Overall 8.5/10
I like the idea and it's expressed well. The expression and pose of the sims are great. The only thing is that, the colours of the room are to bright. I'm not sure if it's her room and if it's not then the colours probably wouldn't be that dark but it just throws the picture off a bit. And the colours of the room don't really go..I'm a bit of a perfectionist and I hate it when things don't go well together. But apart from my need for perfectness you did a very good job. Also the poem is great!
Total: 71/80
Dropped OutLilith Noir - SweetBaby
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