First topic message reminder :Well, we got a few hits and misses, but overall, everyone did a great job! :D
Rage - Drea Hardy - Pistolkitten
Akasha:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
9/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Picture
9/10 - Overall
She's pissed! lol I love it! I really love your poem too. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Picture
9/10 - Overall: Very creative idea. The picture doesn't wow me but it's still good. Same with the poem. Good job.
Toblie:
10/10- Represents
10/10- Creativity
10/10- Picture
10/10- Overall.
Great shot, she really looks mad and the papers on the floor I can just see her throwing them down as she walks away from the barbies in disgust. I like how my eye is drawn to the girls then back to ur model as we wanna see why they look so horrified. I can't fault this except the candle that's my own little pet peeve it's in her way.
Total: 115/120
Euphoria - Mistee Rayn - RepulsiveDesire
Akasha:
8/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Picture
9.5/10 - Overall
Ooh, I looove this picture! And I love the poem...short, sweet, and to the point! lol They work well together. I love how maniacal and sinister your model looks and the guys in the cages. Freakin awesome! I wish I could switch yours and Vid's though. lol Because I think yours would have worked better for plain joy and Vid's would have worked better for euphoria, but maybe that's just me... Awesome job!
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
9.5/10 - Creativity
9.5/10 - Picture
8.5/10 - Overall: The picture is great, as always. But the poem is too short, it doesn't describe the picture. I know you can do better. But otherwises well done.
Toblie:
10/10- Represents
10/10- Creativity
9/10- Picture
10/10- Overall
What a great picture u really did this well. I love the man meat in the cages and she looks so pleased with herself. The smoky effect is great. I can't find anything wrong except I thing it's a little to smoky but then it would probably lose its affect. Really good.
Total: 114/120
Joy - Shane Stone - vidkid20
Akasha:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
9.5/10 - Picture
9.5/10 - Overall
I love how you took a different angle on joy. The poem is intense and the picture represents it well. I love the grungy-ness of it. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Picture
10/10 - Overall: I really liked this. The poem was good, the picture was good, the setting, the idea. Well done.
Toblie:
8/10- Represents
9/10- Creativity
9/10- Picture
9/10- Overall
Wowsers, a really warped view of joy. The colour tones a great and it's always good to see death pop into screenies. The only thing is I think he looks to stiff. But overall great job
Total: 114/120
Shame - Moxxi - sereniticat
Akasha:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Picture
10/10 - Overall
Wow! And you said you couldn't write! lol This picture is so incredibly beautiful and matches the poem so well! I never would have thought of Eve for this. Awesome job!
Phoebe:
9/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
8.5/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Picture
9/10 - Overall: I really loved the idea and the picture looks great. I can't really find anything bad about this. But just the fact that the whole Adam and Eve thing so you could have used a bit more creativity, but still it worked. Well done.
Toblie:
8/10- Represents
10/10- Creativity
10/10- Picture
9/10- Overall
Fantastic picture the colours are brilliant. The poem was great, the only thing is I think the model doesn't look to shameful more seductive. But still really good.
Total: 112.5/120
Hatred - Lysander Sheath - Westiedog123
Akasha:
9/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
8/10 - Creativity
8/10 - Picture
8/10 - Overall
The poem is great, and you can really feel the hatred in it. The picture represents the poem well, but I would like to have seen more from the guy in the background. Good job! PS. I think the other picture you showed us would have worked a little better. From now on, please don't post any outtakes for the current assignment...it just confuses me...
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
10/10 - Creativity
10/10 - Picture
9.5/10 - Overall: Your poem was good and so was your picture. I love the lighting and it just looks..good. But it didn't quite POP, it was totally amazing. That's why it's only 9.5 if your wondering. Anywho, good job.
Toblie:
8/10- Represents
9/10- Creativity
9/10- Picture
8.5/10- Overall
Great colours used, the reds, he really looks menacing. I don't really understand the guy in the background, I understand u mentioned it was himself. Just maybe a little more action from the background guy so we can understand why he hates himself.
Total: 106.5/120
Wonder - Dominatrix Mercy - Evie
Akasha:
8/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
8/10 - Creativity
7.5/10 - Picture
7.5/10 - Overall
Hmm...while you represented wonder ok, there's nothing particularly gothic about this picture... It's a little bright with all the snow and daylight... Good job anyway.
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
8.5/10 - Creativity
9/10 - Picture
8/10 - Overall: The poem was a bit short but that doesn't stop it from being good. I would have liked to see a better pose, that one was a bit simple. Also she's a bit far away, and if she was looking at the camera it would have been better. Anyway good job.
Toblie:
8/10- Represent
10/10- Creativity
9/10- Picture
9/10- Overall
Another good picture, and more male nudity O_o lol. The only thing is maybe if the shot was pulled in tighter to them and less of a background.
Total: 102.5/120
Sadness - Chase Gordon - JKAmaryllis
Akasha:
9/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
8/10 - Creativity
8/10 - Picture
8/10 - Overall
I like this picture, it shows sadness well, but it's really hard to tell who's supposed to be the main focus. Your model is shrouded in darkness, so he doesn't stand out. I think a few well placed lights would have made this shot work better. Good job.
Phoebe:
10/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
9/10 - Creativity
8.5/10 - Picture
8.5/10 - Overall: It shows sadness, the poem was good but it's sort of basic. And if I didn't know who your model was I'd be sort of confused who is. Your model needs to stand out so peopel know who is your model. Also the picture was a bit dark so maybe a bit more lighting? Good job.
Toblie:
8/10- Represents
8/10- Creativity
8/10- Picture
8/10- Overall
Nice set you set up like an old church. I find myself drawn to the white angle in the background. Your model just seems to get lost I don't really look at him. I would much have preferred to have seen him sad than others mourning over him, but still a great shot. And try and play around with lighting. Still a sweet job. Your model is the man right?
Total: 101/120
Guilt - Nix - Grimzi
Akasha:
8/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
7.5/10 - Creativity
7/10 - Picture
7.5/10 - Overall
Your poem represents guilt well enough, but the picture doesn't so much. Also, I think the editing ruined the shot...it's way too much and a bit beyond what's allowed. This shot just feels a bit lazy to me...
Phoebe:
8/10 - How well your picture represents the emotion given
7.5/10 - Creativity
7.5/10 - Picture
7.5/10 - Overall: I think the picture would have been better without the editing. The poem doesn't really do anything for the picture, and it doesn't quite show guilt powerfully. It's just basic. Anyway you still did a good job.
Toblie:
8/10- Represents
8/10- Creativity
7/10- Picture
7/10- Overall
Ok so I don't know if that is a frame on your screenie so I have taken that into account, it's really set up well the colour used is great but maybe a little less of it, she disappears and I find myself looking more at the landscape and the water. It's different and I like it.
Total: 90.5/120
-Eliminated-No one since two people dropped out.
Good luck on the next assignment!!